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lol =)

dizi is a chinese flute haha (you probably know but yeah). try adding more grace notes and stuff to that line, most dizi are very flexible instruments. and go higher.
until of course youre trying to stay true to the game music xactly

krssvr responds:

yeah they are pretty cool and i love the way they sound too!

Great Sound

My one piece of advice is that you think too much about melody and chord (bassline) and the sound but you lack on complexity. Your percussion part is repetitive and plays beats. It also uses only standard equipment. Try something new, like vibraphone or chimes or timpani.
Your harmody is also pretty simple pitchwise. I hear a lot of single repeating notes. (starting at 1:00). This type of repetition is not good, it is wasted creative space.

You also have a few too many places where different instruments playing in unison to each other. (i enjoy 2:00+ a lot). Add voices that play different things. It just seems very melody and harmony only and sounds simplistic that way.

On the other hand, I can tell you did a lot of work and its not actually all that simple. (I compose also). Your mix of sounds is good and your extra additions to the melodies are great, but you simply spent too much energy worrying about sound and not to complexity.

5/5

Anthouse21 responds:

Just the kind of review i was looking for! Very helpful!!! Glad u liked it though and look fwd to more pointers from you. Ill continue working on this track and repost no telling when though. lol Again thanks my friend!

Im pumped

your climax at 3:50
add giant bass notes in your bassline brass. in fifths or fourths or octaves, adds dimension and epicness.

nice guitar part. I could use with a bit more of it thru the song.

at the beginning feel free to add some more stuff to it, its a very boring beginning if i may say. ex, you could use that flute-y instrument i hear later.

AudioVision responds:

Damn see I forgot to do that when I was making the song... i KNEW i forgot something when I uploaded this... well thanks for the review! The reviews on this song are awesome cuzz there's criticism, but it's constructive.

AGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!

YOU GET A NINE!! YES A NINE.

please please please please, add the "left panned bass" at least some of the time to this rest of the song. for example, at 0:25. or if you want to go nuts, give the bass a unique new part and you'll be god.

please please please. =P

PS. its pretty good now, but its just MISSING that bass you used in the beginning. but i like what youve done a lot already. with the back and forth of the two leading synths counterpoint. the back and forth of the left and right sound movement is cool

b0b3rt responds:

I might remake this song in the future, thanks for the idea.

relaxing

I like it. Its a bit dull tho, you could really do with a more interesting percussion part and less repeated piano arpeggio.
your voice is fine, the volumes good, add some flair to your vocal part, rise to unprecedented heights, quite literally. or to magnificent lows
the reverb is a bit much for my taste, a lot of carried over noise, esp for the cymbal thingy

fishfood2021 responds:

Alright thanks for the critisism. I'll be back to editing it as soon as I can get all this stuff figured out >.<. Thanks again for reviewing.

omg, ma foot is possessed!

its tapping. =P

i like that string sounding pulse.
and it does feel icy and snowy.
5'ed

Realmguys responds:

Wow that's cool! Thank you very much for the review. :)

perfect feel.

i liked ur string line a lot. with the suspensions.

a lil short.

what plugin/soundlibrary thingymajij did u use? and software?

5'ed

Leimrey responds:

True... it is short. I am still working on it ;)

I used FL with an Orchestra Soundlibrary.

Very calm, quiet.

Im not so sure bout the darkness. This is a rather calm serene piece to me. Yeah i guess it could work lik u said, but it seems only a touch of melancholy. Not so much the despair of the emptyness of no hope.

Btw, yeah. I think of ice and snow too.

And what flute did u use?

Nice job. 10/10 5/5 =)

Reasoner responds:

hmmmm..flute? No flute present, but there is a sine wave synth that plays the lead. I guess it does kinda sound like a flute lol. Thanks for the review and the vote!!

ok, but midi still sucks.

esp the viola one.

good effort tho? =)

Cat333Pokemon responds:

Have you even heard a real viola?

Haha very nice.

I rlly like the lil soft part b4 the song rlly gets going. (:30ish)

U coulda done a bit more complex/interesting of a bass line tho.

Happy New Years, thanks for the song

Envy responds:

Your'e welcome?

Lol I could have but I was trying to stay away from being too complex on this one

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